100 Word Challenge!!
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Week of April 27
There is one prompt this week, it’s a picture
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In a place there was a happy place to enjoy and we would have fun and hangout with people until someone explored a creepy town. The town has a weird tree and for some reason I found a book about it. It said we need to stay away from it but when I came and got closer it didn’t do anything to me. It was a tree that had no leaves. WHAT THE HECK. So I just got home that it was a creepy tree lol. I thought that was an evil tree
THERE A LIAR!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
You should stay away!
It was a dark and stormy night, I was trying to go to bed but the rain was too loud. I stayed up because I couldn’t sleep and it wasn’t that peaceful at all. I heard noises all night and then the T.V went on randomly. I started to get scared, I went into my living room where my T.V was, then I saw that my family was there because it was my B-day. I totally forgot. I was super excited, it was awesome! We went to Red Robin that night, opened presents at my house, it was the best night I’ve had.
Lucky you!
100WC April 28 Maddy
One day Mui Mai, the panda, was wanting his friend to come over. His mom told him he could have a friend over at 6 o’clock P.M. Later when his friend Mya came over, she thought they could take a walk. They thought it would be cool at night, what they didn’t know is that tonight was a full moon. They took a walk over to a graveyard where there was a funny looking tree that was sideways. When Mya looked at the tree she saw it was a full moon. What will happen next? The end for now.
What is a panda doing in the graveyard?
I don’t know but he is a bad panda for doing that!
100WC April 27 Triston
It’s late night in Fall and Grizzly Bear mom looking for her Grizzly cub.It would be 5 minutes until Sunset.The moma bear was looking everywhere in the forest but couldn’t find her cub.So she had to go search the farm fields.But then something bad happened the moma bear got attacked by three wolves.But easaly the moma bear scared the wolf’s away.There was a tree right in her view with the sun about to set behind it.hen the mom heard something by the tree and it was her cub.Then her and her cub went back home.
Hi Triston
What a lovely story! I am so pleased that the moma bear found her cub. You had me worried there!
There are a few words missing from some of your writing, can you make sure that you read your writing aloud when you check it? Sometimes when I am writing on my phone or iPad, I use Siri or Google to read my writing out for me. I then realise I have made a silly mistake!
Keep writing!
Mrs Badge
Leicester, United Kingdom.
Team 100WC
100 word challenge
Payton
Coco and her family moved to a bigger house in Australia. When she got to the house she ran straight inside, she first saw the kitchen then she ran into the living room with a piano. She went into the next room. Her parents’ bedroom. The movers already put the stuff in the house. She went up the stairs into her room. “Wow!” Her room was beautiful! Later that night Coco was looking out her window. And she saw fog misting over the ground, and the bright moon behind a dead tree. She was very curious, so Coco ran outside and right into the fog. The next morning she did not come back.
Ooh Payton what a mystery you’ve written. I love mystery stories so I really enjoyed reading yours. I liked how you set the scene so well and to be honest I wasn’t expecting what happened at the end as you had lulled me into a false sense of security with our great descriptions of the house move but now I’m left wondering what happened next? well done. Excellent writing for this week’s 100 word challenge.
Máire O’Keeffe (Team 100wc)
Galway
Ireland
100WC April 27 Kaylin
I could not sleep. There was a super moon outside. My parents had closed my curtains so I would sleep instead of looking at it all night. But that did not stop me. I would still get up to gaze at the glorious super moon. Every time I got up the moon was brighter. Until midnight, when it started to fade. I kept thinking why is the moon so bright on these nights. The next time I got up there wasn’t any glow, so now I knew it was time for bed. I checked the time and it was 7:45am.
Hi Kaylin. Well done on your 100 word challenge this week. You have used lots of great descriptions of the moon in your piece and I really like how the moon was almost drawing you to look at it even though the curtains were closed. I especially like when you described getting up to “gaze at the glorious super moon” as it creates a lovely image in my mind. Well done and keep up the good work.
Máire O’Keeffe (Team 100wc)
Galway
Ireland
Thank you so much!!:D
Hi Kaylin. Well done on your 100 word challenge this week. You have used lots of great descriptions of the moon in your piece and I really like how the moon was almost drawing you to look at it even though the curtains were closed. I especially like when you described getting up to “gaze at the glorious super moon” as it creates a lovely image in my mind. Well done and keep up the good work.
Máire O’Keeffe (Team 100wc)
Galway
Ireland
Kirill April 30 100 wc
So I think about that tree as one of those in Japan and the reason is if you look closely you can see some fog which is mostly a Japanese thing because it’s really humid there, and that moon… I can look at it forever. Plus you probably saw mountains there which are in Japan, and I think it’s a sunrise because the moon is “pretty low” and it’s not that dark for sunset and it’s like purple pink which is a morning thing because of some natural process I have no clue about all.
Hi Kirill
I like the description you have written for the prompt for this 100WC. You have given clear reasons for your ideas. Well done.
Mrs P (Team 100WC)
Wellington, New Zealand
100WC WEEK OF APRIL 27
ANTONIO
Disinterested because not a lot to look at
Confused
The sky is blue and has 1 cloud
Tree is dead and has no leaves
The sky is blue and orange like it should be
Afternoon i guess it could be like seven o clock
I guess it could be scary
By the time i finish this the tree will look like that
There is fog the fog looks like fog so it’s working properly
There is no context to this so it’s hard
There is hills and mountains in the back ground
There is snow so it could be in like greenland or something
Read what other students posted. This may give you an idea of how to write from a picture. It is challenging!
Isabella
100WC
May 1st 2020
One night there was a beautiful moon and I was walking toward the moon and all of a sudden I had a memory and I thought is this the thing that happened to me last week all of the sudden I realized that I painted this, last week. I can’t believe that it was meant to be. I got my canvas out and started painting it while it lasted. Someone was passing by and saw that I was painting and they came over and threw the muddy water. I got mad and ran and tackled her.Then there was a cop just staring at us. He did nothing.
I like the déjà-vu reference. I wonder why this person wanted to destroy your painting! Well done!