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Week of May 11
There is one prompt this week (written by a kid from New Zealand):
…The deafening screams echoed through the cold night…
Remember the entire phrase must be somewhere in your prompt. If you want, you can start a sentence with the prompt.
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100WC May 12 Maddy
About a month later after Mui Mai’s mom found out that Hailey didn’t go to the cave Mui Mai, the panda, was able to stay home alone. His mom left, for what Mui Mai doesn’t know, he invited friends over. Hailey and Mya came over. They both were wondering where Mui Mai’s mom is and Mui Mai told them they are sleeping. Later that night they went outside. They were walking and Mya got stung! Mya and Hailey screamed! Mui Mai ran home! The deafening screams echoed through the cold night. What will happen next? The end for now, bye!
Hi Maddy,
Ouch, the sting must have been really bad to cause Mya and Hailey to scream so loudly! I’m not sure why Hailey screamed if she didn’t get stung. Maybe she got a fright?
I wonder whether they woke Mui Mai’s mum with all their noise?
Thank you for your story,
Michelle, Team 100wc,
Melbourne, Australia
In a place there was a cave that one family used to live in but one day on a cold night one of the family members was gone and the mother heard the deafening screams echoed through the cold night. So the family decided to find him and rescue him before he died so they ran and ran but they were too late. He had already got eaten so the mother and father decided to kill him together. The mother was sad that her son died but they packed all there stuff and leave
Never again never going back.
Never
That’s an unpleasant story to read.
100WC May 11 Triston
Christmas day 1944 Sergant named Daniels was in the 1st Infantry Division in the U.S Army in WW2.The 1st was in France holding the front line.It was sunrise and out of nowhere a German platoon ambushed the 1st Infantry base.Gun fire was coming out of nowhere.The 1st Infantry knew they had to hold the line so the good thing for the U.S is they had cover the Germans were attacking they did not have a lot of cover.It’s now night time the Germans are gone but the deafening screams echoed through the cold night from the wounded.
Hi Triston, you have really got the feel of this story in a reporting style. I like the way you have listed all the events and information making for a very clear account of happenings. The haunting ending with the screams of the wounded is really powerful, well done.
100 word challenge
Payton
The deafening scream echoed throughout the cold night. As adi and her sister Chloe walked through the park, Or at least thought it was a park.the wolves howled loud and clear. It was 9:00 at night, the girls were just on a walk before bed. Then… “ow! Chloe i just fell over something!” Chloe signed her flashlight on adi. “Gasp!” Chloe said. “This is not the park… this is a graveyard!” “AHHHHHHHHHHH!” adi ran far away all the way home. But she forgot Chloe! On the other hand… “ AHHHHH!” hear the girl’s mom. Then their mom went out looking for her daughters after she heard the scream.
100WC May 11 Kaylin
Those screams, Those defining screams echoed through the night. Why would they be riding a roller coaster at night? Wait, I do not live by a theme park. Did they build one?
¨I have to go and check it out.¨
So I did, ¨OH MY GOSH!¨ They built a roller coaster. It was HUGE! I had to ride it! So I did, but little did I know that, there was, ¨AHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHH!¨
A drop. As soon as you got to the top the tracks opened and you fell.
SPLASH!
¨THANK GOODNESS THERE WAS WATER! What would´ve I done?
My First camping Trip
I decided one day that I wanted to go on a camping trip to the mountains. I packed everything I needed and headed out. This was a happy moment because I was doing it by myself. Once I got to the area that I wanted I then had to find a flat spot but all I could find was a spot near a big spooky cave oh my. I got all settled in when night fell. The deafening screams echoed through the night in the cave. Come to find out in the morning it was just the wind in the c
100WC Sean
One day we went camping, we hiked and went fishing. My nieces and I played in the river. While we were laying in our tents I heard weird screaming and I thought that it was the wind so I got up and walked towards the river. I saw a reflection in the river and it wasn’t me, it was a child that died at the river many years ago. I started to run back to the tents and the deafening screams echoed through the cold night. The noises lasted all night so my family decided to pack up and leave when the sun came up.
Isabella
100WC
May 15 2020
The deafening screams echoed through the cold night while I was walking back to find Isabella and everyone else. It was scary because I was afraid that there were snakes in the tall grass next to me while I was walking on the dirt and rocky path. I was getting really tired and I saw some flat ground so I ran as fast as I could over to the flat ground.There was still some rocks and cactus so I just curled up into a ball and I fell asleep. It was morning and I kept on walking to find my friends.